Too self-promotional (Score: 1)

by evilviper@pipedot.org on 2015-09-10 11:52 (#M0VX)

Summaries should be reasonably detached and impartial, not puffy & promotional. i.e.:

"the most advanced"
"a powerful new dimension"
"a revolutionary experience"

If you'd like to try resubmitting with a different source that isn't copying Apple's PR, it should be a decent story.
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