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[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Viviana looks two or three years too young in this and the next page. I don't know why this happened.

This one goes to all the artists out there: I'm looking for a professional comic artist who can draw my new science fantasy comic The Adventurous Scarlet Carolus and the Machine of Eternal Summer I'm very excited about my new comic and believe that it has the potential to become a seminal work of the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The identity of Viviana's parents is finally revealed! Until then, many readers had speculated that Viviana could be an Ileasaarian princess.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The Tower in the Sky. This page is among those whose draft had to be revised the most often. First, we had to decide on the final design of the tower, and then I [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: A lot of suspense is generated in the last panel. You really want to know what Viviana is looking up to. I tried to end as many pages as possible on small cliffhangers to [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I'm very fond of the color composition with the dark brown cave, the light blue ghost, the purple word bubbles, Viviana's blond hair, and her red pajamas.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The meaning of the scene and the dialog was finally revealed seven years later in The Door #59 and The Bipartite Mind #8. Viviana's vision shows the last minutes of San's life, mixed together [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The ring's color indicates how many seconds are left before the hole collapses. Lilith's lyrics are taken from the song Autumn by the German pop rock band Fools Garden. It's one of my ten [...]

I've been working hard on my new comic The Adventurous Scarlet Carolus and the Machine of Eternal Summer. I have now written the dialog for almost 200 pages and will soon be ready to hire an artist to draw the comic. However, I will need the rest of October to understand better how many pages [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The box contains only a couple of real metal plates. The bottom contains the Lilith golem in disassembled form. It's hidden behind a mirage that makes it look like the entire box is filled [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I guess most readers expected that there's a traitor amid the Shadowdancers, with Chereck being the most obvious candidate due to his rough looks. But I deliberately decided against that, since traitors are ubiquitous [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Sometimes you have to spend some time to come up with dialog that conveys neither too much nor too little information. In this case, I struggled with Viviana's line in the last panel. It [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: If you do it too often, your story loses its focus, but once in a while it's a good idea to show a scene that doesn't have an immediate impact on the plot. Such [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Sandril clearly doesn't approve of his father's lifestyle.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: And Arty succeeded as we can see in The Way Back Home #184.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: In the third panel, Eldor is putting the logo of the Disciples of the Two Heavens on Elea's forehead to lead San on the right track. In the fourth panel, it would have been [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I introduced Kali mainly to serve as Eldor's conversational partner in this scene. Without one, the reason for Eldor's attack would have been completely incomprehensible, and I couldn't have shown the scene this way.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Gaia doesn't have many fight scenes. First, it's very difficult to describe the course of action in a comic script. You often have to wait for the first sketch and then try to make [...]