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[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I was very worried about this page when writing the script for it. I didn't find any good reference pictures for the teleportation effect and I had only some vague ideas about how it [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The following chapter title Monster" was meant as direct continuation of Ryn's interrupted sentence, but I don't think many readers got that.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The newspapers were the only thing not destroyed by the fire. The cellar of the municipal archive remained intact.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Lilith looks truly terrifying in this page with her black eyes, and it's totally unclear what kind of spell she's casting in the last panel. Some readers already expected the worst.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The two souls in the upper part belong to Lilith and Viviana, the one in the bottom part belongs to San. Lilith and San are Eldor's touched ones". Unknown to Eldor, Viviana was conceived [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Ilias is remembering that the birthdays of Viviana and Lilith are just one day apart and correctly concludes that it could be of importance.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Viviana wrote the note while she was in some kind of trance, similar to Amos when he was giving Ryn the old newspaper.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The scene conveys that something isn't right with the inhabitants of Oakdale. However, this wasn't really necessary at this point and the dialog is going nowhere. I considered removing these two pages from the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Finally some light-hearted action in this rather dark chapter! I love how Alissa is relentlessly teasing poor Viviana.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Credit where credit is due: Viviana's two lines in the third and fourth panel are based on the comment She just wants him to serve under her." made by our reader Arky under the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The second panel features one of my favorite drawings of Viviana in all of Gaia with her cute unsure facial expression. Regarding the page layout, it would have been more conventional to make the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Lilith had the long conversation with Eldor shown in the following chapter Monster during the previous night, which explains her piercing stare in the last panel.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The text box in the last panel contains a sentence spoken by Eldor in Monster #63.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The first panel of this page caused some problems because I wasn't happy with the first two drafts Powree provided. But then I had the idea of showing the wolf's eyes directly from the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The best part of this page is Viviana's look of utter desperation in the last panel. Powree did a marvelous job at it!