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[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Task failed successfully.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: It was clear to me that both Lilith and Viviana needed the ability to fly in the next chapter, The Door. I initially planned to give Viviana's new legs the ability of flight. This [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I had a lot of trouble making Lilith's dialog in the last panel understandable. It's a complex subject and the nuances in Lilith's statement are lost easily when changing the phrasing without taking a [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Lilith is remembering how she altered Eldor's calculation in Oakdale. Thanks to her improved health, she now also has a much clearer picture of the future world lines.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The call is from Aolilatse who wants to pledge allegiance to Viviana, and possibly woo her.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: This is my favorite panel in the whole comic! The pose is perfect, the facial expression is perfect, the camera angle is perfect, and the whole scene is awesome!

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Eldor is able to breathe in space" since there's the same amount of air everywhere.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Teglen is getting teleported back to Greendew by a hidden portal that was placed on top of the hole opened by Eldor. Creating such a portal was a crucial part of the plan since [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Until this moment, Eldor has never really cared much about what the Shadowdancers did in the Shadowkeep since he could have easily dispelled them if needed.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: I wouldn't like to be in San's shoes right now.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Our reader Puyon put it best: Viviana's charisma stat is off the charts. Diplomacy, persuasion, bluffing, seduction, intimidation, she can do it all!" I later used this quote for Malva's speech in The Third [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: The third panel shows Faye, Xarlaxe and Ariella as they're roaming the ruins of Mithra. The fourth panel shows Eric and Ira as they're fighting against a group of monsters somewhere in Ileasaar. While [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: If Viviana hadn't interrupted Eldor's plans with her speech, he would have double-checked the calculation altered by Lilith. He also would have noticed then that the wrong setup of the acceleration unit caused the [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Ilias is having the idea to record the operation and show it as part of the speech. He's leaving to ask Lilith if they could shield the recording crystal in such a way that [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: If you're missing Dyson: He's in Silverleaf together with his parents. He was already out of his depth when traveling with Sandril. He's a solid archer and wizard, but he just doesn't have what [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Some readers were critical of the form of San's vow of allegiance. I don't think the criticism is warranted, though, since it's a heartfelt pledge and San also couldn't have waited much longer to [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Lilith isn't able to recollect what exactly she did in Oakdale. But she's talking about the moment when she made Eldor write 12" instead of 13" in Monster #79, which ultimately allowed her to [...]

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Unfortunately, Viviana's dress doesn't really look good without a fitting cloak like the one introduced on page #22.

[SPOILER] Click here to see my commentary for this page! My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est: Of course it hasn't escaped Viviana's sharp eyes that the guy looks exactly like King Savos. But she doesn't believe it to be him in this context, so she assumes it must be somebody [...]