Monster 082

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My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est:Note how there's already a little hole through Eldor's illusion to the left of Lilith's forefinger in the first panel. Such details make a comic look less static. In the first draft, the camera zoomed in on Lilith's eyes in the last two panels. But that made her look too much like a completely deranged maniac, so I asked Powree to zoom out instead and make Lilith's facial expression a bit more reserved.