The Letter Of Jael Bara 014

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My comment for this page from Gaia: sic mundus creatus est:I wanted Viviana and Teglen to reference the royal family of Ileasaar, but I forgot to introduce them earlier in the story. So I decided to use an additional text box to give the readers the necessary context. That's certainly not optimal, but I think it's acceptable if done only a handful of times over the course of a thousand-page epic.